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If we could only see our faces, then maybe we could decipher the twisted words that were about to change our lives forever. My head was throbbing, and I twitched every time I heard the heart monitor beep. What had happened? I couldn’t move. Machines surrounded me on all sides. I could see no one around me. I heard voices as I stared at the white ceiling. It was mocking me. Those words, those terrifying words I had just heard roll and drip off a man’s tongue. Those words seemed to poison me make my eyes burn, and my ears bleed.
That night, I can barely remember it. My best friend and I were hanging out, laughing and talking and, -. Wait, I’m starting to remember now. There was a group of people staring at us. They didn’t like us, and they expressed it far too well. We weren’t doing anything; we were just minding our own business. But no, they didn’t care, they didn’t they, -! I found myself screaming aloud for everyone to hear me. Dark figures with white masks were suddenly hovering over me. A prick in my arm, before my world once again fades to black.
©2007-2009 ~WolfGoddess182
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Author's Comments

Nothing special, just something I had to do for Creative Writing. Can you tell I'm bored?
I'm not a big writer, so well don't expect a lot.
Comments are welcome though. :D
Maximum : 200 words.

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:iconmylittleponygurl:
Oh my God,

Frankie... this is fucking amazing.
I felt... fear when I read this.
It was so easy to fall into the character's being!

Holy shitt.

Great job.

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:ambulance:
:iconmechaganon:
It's a tad depressing but good writing, Adrian! :D

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Broken door no longer opens.
:iconwolfgoddess182:
thank youuuu :D

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"We're very attractive to them because we dress like homeless people. " - Mikey Way

"Frank, what are you doing in the box?" -Gerard.
"I'm your present!" -Frank


FrEaK.
:iconwolfgoddess182:
Thank youuuuuu.
I've never been a writerr.
But you always make me feel good about everything :D

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"We're very attractive to them because we dress like homeless people. " - Mikey Way

"Frank, what are you doing in the box?" -Gerard.
"I'm your present!" -Frank


FrEaK.
:iconmylittleponygurl:
Haha, well you should feel good anyways. You wrote a masterpiece. <3

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:ambulance:
:iconwolfgoddess182:
Well......now i wouldn't say THAT.

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"We're very attractive to them because we dress like homeless people. " - Mikey Way

"Frank, what are you doing in the box?" -Gerard.
"I'm your present!" -Frank


FrEaK.

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